Today, in all classes, we practiced using MEETS to find evidence.
M--money
E--effort and education
E--effects at home and globally
T--time
S--safety
If you consider all these timeless concerns, you'll have some pretty convincing support for your argument. Check out this example:
For the thesis "Students should drink more water" ----
M--(money)-- Water is cheap. Compared to juices or sodas, it's a big money-saver.
E--(effort/ed)-- Water helps me stay focused to learn. Dehydrated people get headaches. Plus, it's easy. Just walk to the faucet or filter some with a carbon filter.
E--(effects)-- If students drank more water, we would have a healthy world: more efficient workers, less tooth decay, and less obesity.
T--(time)-- Water drinkers live longer lives; they spend more time outside. Starting a water drinking habit can impact every area of someone's life. People who feel healthier, act healthier, and live longer.
S--(safety)--People don't have water allergies. Especially if you use a filter, water is the safest, most natural drink there is. You're made of it!
Tomorrow, we'll brainstorm and see what evidence you can gather for your own persuasive essay.
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